Hi Ridge, I think your whare is good but I think the blue in the background took it away a little bit and your camera was a little wobbly,but I liked how you explained what everything meant cleary.can you visit my blog at lakebrunnerbridgtr.blogspot.co.nz
Great recording Ridge, you chose a great spot to record. You have explained each wall really well, but I wonder what happened with your microphone to make your voice change! That cheetah drawing is awesome and was a great choice to symbolise your speed.
Hi Ridge. I like your clear and concise descriptions of the walls of your whare. The family side seemed to fade out mid sentence. I was left wondering if there was more you wanted to say? The symbolism you chose to represent each wall with was clearly relevant to you as well as creative. It was a pleasure to work alongside you on this project.
Hi Ridge, I think your whare is good but I think the blue in the background took it away a little bit and your camera was a little wobbly,but I liked how you explained what everything meant cleary.can you visit my blog at lakebrunnerbridgtr.blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi Ridge, I liked your whare, and how you got other people to do your voice overs? I hope they were well paid.
ReplyDeleteGreat recording Ridge, you chose a great spot to record. You have explained each wall really well, but I wonder what happened with your microphone to make your voice change! That cheetah drawing is awesome and was a great choice to symbolise your speed.
ReplyDeleteHi Ridge. I like your clear and concise descriptions of the walls of your whare. The family side seemed to fade out mid sentence. I was left wondering if there was more you wanted to say? The symbolism you chose to represent each wall with was clearly relevant to you as well as creative. It was a pleasure to work alongside you on this project.
ReplyDeleteHi, thanks for commenting on my blog, My family side was really short and I am pretty sure it was supposed to end when it did.
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